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Elizabeth InchbaldREMARKS [on The Revenge].1
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It is certain, that Dr. Young was no enthusiastic admirer of Shakspeare's "Othello"—To suppose he was, is to accuse him of high presumption in hoping to write a still better play. For that he could take the same subject, which an admired author had used with infinite success, and not hope to transcend him, agrees but ill with the ambition of any dramatist; much less with that of the aspiring Young.2

"The Revenge" is so excellent a production, that the reader will forgive the author's attempt, and compassionate his failure. In one of his characters, indeed, he has surpassed the genius of Shakspeare—but immorally so—he has adorned malice and its kindred vices, with a sentiment appropriate to the rarest virtue—scrupulous regard for unblemished honour.

The high-sounding vengeance of Zanga charms every heart, whilst the malicious purposes of Iago fill every bosom with abhorrence.

Another advantage is given to Zanga in his guilt—the persons, whom he involves in utter ruin, claim far less sympathy than Shakspeare's Othello and Desdemona. Alonzo can excite no interest equal to the first, and Leonora sinks even beneath comparison before the last.

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Dr. Johnson has said, that the inferior characters in the tragedy of "Othello" would make a very good play, were the three superior ones wholly omitted: and certainly Cassio, Roderigo, and Amelia are all excellent parts.3 But, should this method be pursued with the tragedy of "The Revenge," when the best were left out, what could be done with the remaining few? Isabella,4 in particular, is a tool of such insignificance in herself, that, till her importance as an instrument is testified, it seems degrading to the proud mind and acute understanding of the imperious Moor, to trust his perilous design to a woman's secrecy who gives no one proof to the audience of possessing selfrestraint peculiar from the rest of her sex, and powerful enough to keep silence.

Deservedly high as this tragedy must ever rank among English dramas, it is but seldom brought upon the stage, and then the actor who performs Zanga must be its sole support.—This character is of such magnitude, and so unprotected by those which surround him, that few performers will undertake to represent it: a less number still have succeeded in braving the danger. Mr. Kemble stands foremost among those, and draws some splendid audiences every year, merely to see him; though the intervals between his exits and entrances are sure to be passed in lassitude.5

Dr. Young has the praise of being an original poet, but this work cannot be brought as a proof; for besides its resemblance to the "Othello" of Shakspeare, it is alleged he had also in his view the Abdelazer of [Page 5]Mrs. Behn, upon which character Zanga is a grand improvement.6

The originality of Young must be found in his "Night Thoughts."7 Those well known poems, that speak contemptuously of a world, which, if his most distinguished biographers can be relied upon, he loved as dearly as the gayest libertine.

It is a reflection more gloomy than the author's gloomiest composition, that Young was a man the very reverse of him, whom the reader of his "Night Thoughts" would suppose the writer to be.

Dr. Edward Young was the son of the Dean of Sarum, and born at Upham, near Winchester, in June 1681.8 He received his first education in that college; and at Oxford, took the degree of Doctor of Civil Law.9

On quitting the university where he had given testimony of his poetic talents, Young was admitted into the family of Lord Exeter, and became the tutor of Lord Burleigh, with whom he was to travel, and receive as his recompense an annuity for life. But the witty and profligate Duke of Wharton, who at that time rioted in all the vices and follies of London, allured him by his friendship to yield up this honourable engagement, and be a partner with him in all his excesses.10

This eminent poet can easier be forgiven his youthful attachment to the pleasures of the world, than his aged anxiety after its honours. When the Duke's protection ceased with his exile and death,11 Young took orders, as the only means of subsistence; and be-b 3[Page 6]came grave and political, as the only means of preferment.12 He preached excellent sermons on the duty of a christian,13 and wrote as excellent pamphlets to traduce his neighbour the Duke of Marlborough, when that neighbour was out of favour with the court.14

He was fervent in public worship, both at church, and in the dedications he sent forth with his various works; wherein, he has praised God: which gives rise to the suspicion, that he expected as valuable favours from the created, as from the Creator.

Dr. Young was married in 1732 to Lady Elizabeth Lee, daughter of the Earl of Litchfield, and the widow of Colonel Lee.15 About the year 1740, Lady Elizabeth died; and very shortly after, both a daughter she had by her first marriage, and that daughter's husband, (a son of Lord Palmerston) departed this life.16 —Melancholy events, which Young has lamented in strains of pious sorrow in his favourite work.

Notwithstanding his afflictions he survived these losses five and twenty years: then expired at the age of eighty-four,17 enjoying his perfect senses to the last moment—and to the last moment he refused to see his only child, a son, who for some youthful offence had been banished his house; and yet that repentant child sent earnest supplications for pardon, and admission to his father's presence.18

Notes

1.  "Remarks." The Revenge; A Tragedy, In Five Acts; By Edward Young, LL.D. As Performed at the Theatres Royal, Covent Garden and Drury Lane. Printed Under the Authority of the Managers From the Prompt Book. With Remarks by Mrs. Inchbald. London: Printed for Longman, Hurst, Rees, and Orme, Paternoster Row, pp. 3-6. The British Theatre; or, A Collection of Plays, Which Are Acted At the Theatres Royal, Drury Lane, Covent Garden, and Haymarket. Printed Under the Authority of the Managers from the Prompt Books. With Biographical and Critical Remarks, by Mrs. Inchbald. In Twenty-Five Volumes. Vol. XII. Orphan. Venice Preserved. Conscious Lovers. Revenge. Beggar's Opera. London: Printed for Longman, Hurst, Rees, and Orme, Paternoster Row. 1808. The first performance of this play was staged at the Theatre Royal, Drury Lane on April 18th, 1721. Laura DeWitt and Mary A. Waters edited this essay for The Criticism Archive. Back

2.  The plot of this play revolves around the African Prince Zanga's quest for revenge against the Spanish General Alonzo, his former slave master and the murderer of his father. The play has been compared to Othello in the respect that the main character is a Moor (the British term for Muslim inhabitant of Northern Africa), though in this case Zanga is more similar to the character Iago, as Zanga plots the demise of Alonzo and his love interest Leonora. Back

3.  Of Cassio, Roderigo, and Emilia, Johnson writes in his The Plays of William Shakespeare, "Even the inferior characters of this play would be very conspicuous in any other piece, not only for their justness but their strength" (1765, vol. VIII, pp. 472-473). Cassio is Othello's loyal lieutenant; Roderigo is the wealthy and jealous suitor of Desdemona; and Emilia is Iago's wife and Desdemona's maidservant. Back

4.  Isabella is Zanga's mistress and confidant. Back

5.  John Philip Kemble revived The Revenge in 1798, published his own version of the play in 1811, and published a second, further revised version with biographical remarks in 1827. Back

6.  Abdelazer; or, The Moor's Revenge is a 1676 tragedy by Aphra Behn. Abdelazer is an enslaved Moor at the court of the king who killed his father. Abdelazer becomes the lover of the queen, who helps him exact revenge by poisoning the king. Back

7.  Young is best remembered for his The Complaint: or, Night Thoughts (1742–45), a nine-part, didactic blank-verse poem on death. Back

8.  Young was born in 1683 at his father's rectory at Upham, near Winchester, a cathedral city in Hampshire, England. Back

9.  First educated at Winchester College, Young went on to study as a gentleman commoner at New College of Oxford University in 1702. Young later transferred to Corpus Christi at Oxford, finally to receive a fellowship at All Souls at Oxford, where he took his Doctor of Laws degree in 1719. Back

10.  Young dedicated this play to Philip Wharton after Wharton offered him two annuities of £100 each and a bonus sum of £600. For this promise, Young turned down a lifetime annuity offered to him by the Marquess of Exeter in exchange for Young becoming his son's tutor. Wharton failed to fulfill his promise, and Young took him to court, ultimately winning the annuities but not the £600. Back

11.  Wharton renounced the "Old Pretender" James and the Jacobite cause in 1730, at which point he and his wife moved to Catalonia, Spain, where he died of alcoholism the following year. Back

12.  From the 1720s onward, Young became known for his overt attempts to secure patronage through poetry and dedications prefacing his works. These attempts were often targeted at the Hanoverian line and its supporters in nobility and the House of Commons. Young was given minor chaplain positions but failed to secure a steady source of income until he was granted the rectory of Welwyn, Hertfordshire, in 1730. Back

13.  Young's most notable sermons include A Vindication of Providence: or, a True Estimate of Human Life, In which the Passions are considered in a new light (1728), An Apology for Princes: or, The Reverence due to Government (1729), and An Argument, drawn from the Circumstances of Christ's Death, for the Truth of His Religion (1758). Back

14.  Inchbald may here conflate Edward Young with Robert Young, a forger and perjurer who accused the Duke of Marlborough of involvement in Jacobite conspiracy in 1692, at which point Edward Young would have been roughly nine years old. Back

15.  In 1731, Young married Lady Elizabeth Lee, a granddaughter of King Charles II and widow of her cousin, Francis Lee, with whom she had three children. Back

16.  Lady Elizabeth's daughter died travelling to France in 1736. Lady Elizabeth and her son-in-law died in 1740. These losses were the inspiration for Young's Night-Thoughts. Back

17.  Young died on April 5th, 1765, at the age of 81 or 82. Back

18.  Young and his son, Frederick, initially fell out over a disagreement regarding their housekeeper as well as Frederick's spendthrift tendencies. Young refused to see his son until shortly before his death, but the two ultimately reconciled, and Young left everything to Frederick. Back